Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Iron Man
Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Meaning Essay Post #2
Wednesday, October 22, 2008
Comment to Avi Patel's Blog
This is a funny commercial. I remember seeing this on tv, which i guess is the object of the company; to make the audience remember the ad. I like how you put explained this commercial. Your thoughts really make since and I think that you have supportive details to back up your ideas. I also thought that your personal testimony and allusion relate to the commercial at hand. You have a really good base with this ad which will help you in writing your paper. Your paper should turn out pretty well if you stick to these thoughts! Good Luck!
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Meaning Essay
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
Comment to Colton Bickel's Blog Post
This is a very good point that you bring up. I totally agree with what you are going to say in your essay. What is the point to have everything in the world if you don't have a soul to go with it. You would be happy material wise but you wouldn't be happy with your social life. Many times this is hard to see in life though, since humans are all so greedy. Your essay will be easy to appeal to your audience's emotion and value as well by using the art of rhetoric. This should be a very effective essay.