Comment to Colton Bickel's Blog Post

This is a very good point that you bring up.  I totally agree with what you are going to say in your essay.  What is the point to have everything in the world if you don't have a soul to go with it.  You would be happy material wise but you wouldn't be happy with your social life.  Many times this is hard to see in life though, since humans are all so greedy.  Your essay will be easy to appeal to your audience's emotion and value as well by using the art of rhetoric.  This should be a very effective essay.